Sunday, December 2, 2012
Syria needs help!!!!
I believe that the UN should use force and violence to enforce stabilty. Because they have tried asking for a peace treaty in the past and it didnt work. Nothings gettign better there with "10,000 syrian soliders and police officers" having been killed already.In toatl the "syrian army has killled more than 50,000 people". The US needs to step in and help, we have one of the strongest armies in the world and we should nt just sit by and watch as thousands of people are being killed.
The US is hesitant to get involved becaus e they dont want to put there soldier in danger. Although the US have helped "libia and egypt by making a no fly zone" they ended up ending a war that ad been going on for a while. Obama doesnt want to get caught up in another "complicated war in the middle east" which is understandable but we should feel obligated to give back to the people there and help.
Syria shouldnt have to do this alone. When someone needs help they ask but i this case there more or less pleading. Youcan telll syria needs help becaus eonce you become a rebel against the country your as good as dead in there eyes. With the rersources and allies the US has we can help a tremendous amount.
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Shelby,
ReplyDeleteOk post. There are lots of spelling mistakes and type-o's. The paragraphs are very short and rushed.
You have incorporated some good quotes from the lecture and other sources. But if you put something in "quotations", you should cite your source. You don' have to do it formally. You can just say, "According Jonah Goldberg in the theweek.com, "Obama doesn't want to get caught up..."
Quotes need sources. If you don't source, it could be considered plagiarism.
Please dedicate more time to these assignments. We're almost done, so finish strong.
GR: 75