
Many people can agree that 911 was the most terrifying, disatourous, and saddening event to every happen in America history. It mad people all over the country wonder if they were ever safe and what if they were in New York on that day. National security was in a rut and nobody knew how to react. Maybe the real issue was Bush avoiding the fact that people had told him that this was gonna happen and he did nothing about it. Maybe it was Americas poor airport security. The answer may never come to light but we can still see the after math of 911. Many people lost there relatives, firefighters lost there lives trying to protect the people of America. Planes were all cancelled all over the US until president Bush gave permission for governments officials to remove all of Bin Ladens relatives who lived in America back to Saudia Arabia. George W. Bush called for war to try and take down the group Al Queda,

Someone who would disagree with me on american safety is John Payne who believes even though Bin LAden is dead that terrioism is still alive and will continue because Al Queda is still deadly and strong." you can't defeat a tactic" John Payne. Paul Krugman believes that 911 was ment to bring america together but Bush used it as a political high jacking to up his name and not focus on the real issues.
On 911 terrioists high jacked some planes and flew them into the twin towers in hope to reck america. America today is much more cautious the airports are much more safety oriented. But part of America is still super secret on account of national security there scared because they dont know who there fighting or how to fight them. I believe the death of Bin Laden is amazing and a big step to taking down the terroist group Al Queda.
Shelby,
ReplyDeleteYou start off great and strong here, but then it starts to fall short in the end.
Your intro is great. Very well written.
And you correctly go right into the opposing viewpoint in the second paragraph. But where's the last paragraph, that has your analysis and quotes and facts that support your view?
This post seems a bit rushed. It starts strong, but then tapers off.
Also, it was 2 days late, so I have to deduct 10 points.
On the plus side, your writing is excellent and your design is clean and organized. It just seems like you were running out of time and had to cut this post short.
Give yourself the time to finish strong.
GR: 78 (late)